一、第一段 先描述所给图画的象征意义，然后直接点明你的中心思想。 1、我们可以利用以下来表达自己的中心思想：
同意：I agree that it would serve the interests of (给谁带来好处)all nations to establish a global university for the purpose of (为了)solving the world's most persistent social problems(顽固社会题). Nevertheless, such a university poses certain risks which(有什么风险) all participating nations must be careful to minimize(降到最小化)--or risk defeating the university's purpose.(不能实现目标)
反对：I disagree insofar as the point that( )(我不同意~)，which may set into motion of a series of negative consequences.(会带来一系列负面影响)
二、第二段 分点阐释你的中心思想，并且要举例证明，在举例过程中，我们可以应用正反例证：
1、 Two examples that aptly illustrate this point(两个例子可以恰当的解释这个点) involve the fields of ( )。
2、 A telling example of (鲜明的例子)( )
3、 正 ：One compelling argument in favor of a global university has to do with the fact that its faculty and students would bring diverse cultural and educational perspectives to the problems they seek to(努力做什么)solve.
4、反例：It might be tempting to(貌似吸引人的是)think ( ). However, in my view(在我看来) any such concerns are unwarranted(这种担心是毫无根据的), especially considering the growing awareness of(对什么越来越了解)( )。
三、第三段 提出相应的建议或措施，并且在文章最后再次强调你的中心思想。
在文章最后再次强调自己的观点：Nevertheless ,the opposition voice may persist objecting the decision arguing that( ) However， in my view such concerns are groundless ，especially when considering the fact that ( )
附：环境类作文范文 Directions Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following picture. In you writing, you should
1、describe the picture briefly,
2、 interpret its intended meaning, and
3、 give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.(20 points)
范文 Here is a picture, interesting but with profound implication. As is vividly depicted in the photo, there is severe air pollution, which successfully captures our eyes. After a close watch, it is not difficult to find that human are working together to fight it. Apparently, what the drawing has subtly conveyed is supposed to be given further analysis. A conclusion could be drawn from the picture: we human should work together to solve the pollution issue. And my words are based upon the following two reasons. On the top of the list is that air pollution has become common in our country and individuals have no enough strength to cope with it. In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore. It is universally admitted that pollution is the result of neglect of the general public and government, and it has resulted in severe loss in economy. According to the analysis above, it is advisable for us to take steps to cultivate this life attitude. Of all the steps, mass media may play a major role in solving this problem.
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